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Good Narrative Principles

May 18, 2012
by Lee Eiferman
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A Very Busy Day Illustrated Children’s’ Book Illustrator: Tim Duch Two cousins spend an action packed day together.   Luck of the Draw Dramatic short A young woman tries devising a fail proof system to entrap “Lady Luck”.   Ena’s Adventures:  Part One Dramatic Video Short Co-Director/Writer: Kathy High Genre: Historical Fantasy Log Line: A photographer working for the WPA in the 1930’s, sees her subjects secret past through her camera.   Ena’s Adventures:  Part Two Dramatic Video Short Genre: Historical Fantasy Log Line: Our plucky photographer falls in love with a tour guide in a ghost town who wants to start a utopian community.   Jump to the Curb One Act Play Log Line: Following the events on 9/11, co-workers, while drive cross country exchange life stories.  Read more...

August 5, 2010
by Lee Eiferman
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Brutus Meets Betty

FADE UP EXT. PARKING LOT, LAKESIDE — DAY Perfect day. Blue skies. Birds CHIRPING. A standard kids-like drawn car CHUGS into the packed parking lot. BRUTUS, big, imposing, body shaped like a triangle, emerges from the car WHISTLING a happy tune. He’s in the prime of life. Not a care in the world. TRUNK OF CAR Brutus dives into the trunk. Picnic basket, striped beach towel, endless inflatable toys fly into the air. Done, he stands up. Wrestles a collapsible beach chair from the trunk. A heavy metal car jack tangled in the mess of stuff, shoots from the trunk, punctures the inflatable ring, smashes Brutus’ big toe. Brutus’ face turns beet red as he hops around, pulsing big toe in hand. His knee bangs into the side of the car. Ouch! Losing his balance, he tumbles, rolls into a beehive, head first. He runs around. Beehive for a head. Bees swarm around him. BACK AT THE TRUNK Brutus, face a mass of red welts, returns to the car, throws the car jack back in the trunk and slams it closed. Bruised, but determined to have a good time, Brutus grabs his beach stuff and strides off, only to be  Read more...